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I’m thrilled with your work. I liken what I am feeling while reading the paper today to being deeply listened to. I’ve considered all comments and found them to be noteworthy, insightful, and thought-provoking. Tightening the paper up, deleting words makes a huge difference. I had no idea there were no front lines. Good catch on the word ‘stay’ on p. 11. I ordered Smith’s book and Morris’s book, The Evil Hours. I will definitely be on the lookout for adverbs, verbs ending in “ing,” the word “that” and use of tense from now on. Avoidance and/or attention makes all the difference in the world. I hope you didn’t get a headache reading through this paper with as many times as did all of the above. I’m very appreciative of your time and interest in reading my paper.